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Wednesday, October 24, 2012
Sex and the unpretty - HOW TO WRITE A GOOD SHORT STORY?
Want to know how to write a good short story?
For an example, I wrote and rewrote three different stories for Young Adult Magazine at their request. They were dated because I'm dated.
Then I took out several Teen novels and two Teen magazines from the public library. I listened in on teens at the mall. I wished I had a teen(s) in my life.
I immersed myself in Teen language and culture and wrote another short story.
Do I have it right?
I don't know if I have it right yet.
Judge for yourself - story attached
Young adults, middle grade, what do you think? If you like it, so will Marc at Young Adult Magazine and you will see this short story in an upcoming issue. If I didn't get it right...I'll try again.
Don't sweat the small stuff.
- Be real
- Know your audience
- Research other authors
- Use language appropriate to the age group
- Don't talk down
- Do a draft
- Do an outline
For an example, I wrote and rewrote three different stories for Young Adult Magazine at their request. They were dated because I'm dated.
Then I took out several Teen novels and two Teen magazines from the public library. I listened in on teens at the mall. I wished I had a teen(s) in my life.
I immersed myself in Teen language and culture and wrote another short story.
Do I have it right?
I don't know if I have it right yet.
Judge for yourself - story attached
Young adults, middle grade, what do you think? If you like it, so will Marc at Young Adult Magazine and you will see this short story in an upcoming issue. If I didn't get it right...I'll try again.
Don't sweat the small stuff.
Matters about Monty
The only thing worse than hanging out with Monty was knowing
he'd rather be with someone else, someone more popular, more attractive, but
knowing he'd never have a chance with a girl like that. Knowing he was stuck
with me.
Prim tagged along with us after school and the convo turned
desultory. It's hard to be cool when your little sister follows after you like
a basset hound that's lost the scent. Trouble is, I love little Prim and it's
hard to blow her off when you love your little sis like that, even though she's
a pain in the teakettle most days, and you know she's a spy. My mom put her up
to it, spying on Monty and me. Not that Monty was hot, you see, but mom didn't
know a hot boy as opposed to Ottawa Arts Review.
I thought we needed to solve this particular issue fast. As
we turned up our street, which was at the end of a cul de sac in sort of a
blind alley, I gave Prim a little shove toward the door where mom waited,
cookies in hand, grabbed Monty's arm and bolted toward the open spaces at the
other end of Dean Street. He was breathless and continued to hold my hand
until, panting, we dropped to our butts where Dean Street intersected Tyson
Boulevard, out of sight of our house.
"What'd you do that for?" Monty's face was red
with zits and exertion. His dirty blond hair fell in his eyes and he flicked it
up with his thumb.
"I felt like it." I fiddled with the buttons on my
cardigan. "She's a spy. Like the Three Wise Men." Monty's hand was
hot on my jeans. I sat huddled in the snow at the T intersection.
The street was quiet.
"Let's go, sea donkey." My cell phone crowed like
a rooster. It was how I knew it was mine. Who'd be calling me? I only had one
friend, and Monty, and my friend Deirdre would text.
Monty's fingers fumbled with the folds of my sweater.
"Oh, no, you don't. Hello? No, I didn't mean you, dad.
I meant…I'm at the library." Yes,
that's it. Lie to your dad again. lie lie lie lie lie
"It was a sudden decision. No, Prim's perfectly all
right at home. I don't need her here with me, dad. No, tell mom I'm all right.
Yes, Monty's here with me. Yes, dad. Good-bye."
Monty's here with me.
I'm all right.
My sweater pulled up over my jeans and his sweaty hands
pulled on the layers of clothes.
"That's enough, dude. I mean it."
In spite of
myself, I felt a warm flush that began where his hands covered mine. He pushed
me back into the snow. His breath smelled like peppermints. His body exuded
heat and a sort of animal smell that was not unappealing. I grabbed his hand
and bent his fingers back. I heard a snap and he gasped and sat up.
"I told you."
Prim found us ten minutes later. "Are you and Monty
hooking up?" she asked. "Mom and dad had a horrible fight about
you."
"No," I said. "We're not hooking up. You're
wrong, Prim. It's just that…we have nobody else." Monty was walking away.
"That's sick," he said. The strains of Taylor
Swift floated through the dark streets. We
are never ever getting back together…A nervous fusillade of giggles tore
through me and I sat on the street and laughed. It's just that we were two
losers, and I was stuck with him.
I got up and we started slowly back to our home, Prim and I.
Mom met us at the door with cookies. I would text Deirdre tonight. It was going
to be all right.
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